Scrisesm asta acum un an pentru revista scolii si acum am regasit-o intr-un caiet vechi. M-am gandit sa o postez si aici, sa aflu si parerea voastra. Este un dialog in engleza. Mai mult cititi si aflati


HE: Hello stranger. Once upon a time, I wanted to know what love was. Love is there if you want it to be. You just have to see that it's wrapped in beauty and hidden away between the seconds of your life.If you don't stop for a minute, you might miss it. Poets often describe love as an emotion that we can't control, one that overwhelms logic and common sense. That's what it's like for me. I didin't plan falling in love with you, and I doubt that you planned on falling in love with me. But once we met, it was clear that neither of us could control what was happening to us. We fell in love, despite our differences, and once we did, something rare and beautiful was created. For me love like that has happened only once, and that's why every minute we spent together has been seared in my memory. I'll never forget a single moment of it. I'll never see you again, I know it. But when somebody's asked me if it's worth the fight for a single day of love, I answered 'I would rather have had one breath of her hair, one kiss from her mouth, one touch of her hand, than eternity without it.' I wanted to freeze time. I wanted to savor that moment, to live in that moment for a week. But I couldn't stop it, only slow it. And before I knew it, you were gone. After the door closed I felt like the las person on Earth.
SHE: And that's it?
HE: Yes.
SHE: Feel better now?
HE: Not quite.
SHE: Just so you know, you can speed it up. You can slow it down. You can even freeze a moment, but you can't rewind time.
HE: The bad news is the time flies. The good news ... is that you're the pilot.
SHE: What if you're not? What if you're just a ... passenger?
HE: Why, thank you. I've had enough. I'm going now.
SHE: Ok * laughs *. You're completely insane, do you know that?
HE: Yes, I do.
SHE: I don't want trouble.
HE: I'm not trouble, darling.
SHE: Yes, you are. Now, out of curiosity ... who is she?
HE: We're soul mates. It's extremely rare, but it exists. It's sort of like twin souls tuned into each other.
SHE: If you're soul mates, then why did you need to open up like that in front of a random stranger? I think it's important to take the time to tell the people you love how much you love them while they can hear you. Why dindn't you say all these things to her?
HE: Because I've lost her.
SHE: You lost something that it meant to be yours.
HE: Unless you're the one who gets lost first. See, I'm an idiot. I really am trouble. In fact, I am way more than that. I don't want to mess up your life too. So I'm leaving!
SHE: What if I want you to stay?
HE: You don't understand. You don't want me in your life. Remember me as the completely neurotic stranger. It's better this way.
SHE: Maybe I don't understand plople, I don't see things. So, maybe I just don't get what's going on with you or why you're so mad ...
HE: It was nice to meet you, beautiful stranger.
SHE: Just so you know ... for what it's worth, it's never too late to be whoever you want to be. There's no time limit ... start whenever you want ... you can change or stay the sam. There are no rules to this thing. We can make the best or the worst of it. I hope you make the best of it. I hope you see things that stop you. I hope you feel things that you never felt before. I hope you meet plople with a different point of view. I hope you live a life that you're proud of and if that you're not, I hope you have the strengh to start all over again. It was nice to meet you too ... stranger. but you're now a stranger for me ...


Cam asta a fost. Astept pareri, comentarii, critici cat mai multe

Uuu, finally, something in English [Trebuie sa fiti înscris şi conectat pentru a vedea această imagine] .

Well, dialogul este superb, engleza este impecabilă (afară de o mică greșeală de tastare, nu am putut găsi nimic în neregulă cu exprimarea ; timpurile sunt folosite corect, la fel și sintaxa, iar vocabularul este bogat), însă ideea ... nu prea îți aparține.Adică pe scurt ... creația nu e proprie și personală [Trebuie sa fiti înscris şi conectat pentru a vedea această imagine].

Îmi sunau cunoscute toate acele idei ... și modul de expunere ... și cuvintele ... și sentimentele pe care ți le trezesc ... felul în care te fac să zâmbești sau să te încrunți, să fii trist sau fericit ...

Toate sunt doar quote-uri din filme (prima parte sigur este din [Trebuie sa fiti inscris si conectat pentru a vedea acest link], încheierea e un citat din Eric Roth).
Eu nu aduc nici o acuză, însă ... ar fi mult mai drăguț (și mai amabil, față de adevarații autori ; că aici nici nu vine vorba de drepturi de autor ... că doar nu se îmbogățește nimeni din așa ceva) dacă ai trece și locul de unde le-ai luat. [Trebuie sa fiti înscris şi conectat pentru a vedea această imagine]

Ai dreptate, ar fi trebuit sa spun ca m-am inspirat din cateva locuri.
Eh, spun acum.

Filme / Seriale din care am cules citatele: "Grey's Anatomy", "THe Notebook", "Cashback", "City of angels", "The curious case of Benjamin Button".

Si ma bucur ca iti place